Thursday, July 10, 2014

Entry Three

"You pulled me to you again, tilting my face and saying something. Everything about you was fuzzy, floating on the fumes of the bins. Your beautiful mouth was moving like a caterpillar. I reached out and tried to catch it. you took my fingers in yours..." ~(Stolen, Christopher) Pg. 10 I like this passage from my new book Stolen because it shows how connected Gemma is to Ty and it has a lot of imagery which is very creative and lots of cute metaphors. I also chose this because I think its one of many vivid paragraphs in the book that is my true favorite out of all of them. Also you can make a lot of inferences to what's going on by reading this paragraph which I think is awesome. my other favorite piece is "You kept feeding me chocolates. That rich, dark taste... always in my mouth, clinging to my teeth. Before you, I loved chocolate." I like the mystery it has behind it that kept me more interested in the book and wanting to know how he made her not like chocolate anymore. This was an amazing book that kept me going on and on to find out more hope you read it!

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